Hey hi da…. Read 2 more of your stories from the site. Brammanin kirukalkal and thusyantha he thusyantha…
“Brammanin kirukalkal” was a beautiful story on 2nd marriages. Generally this topic is very sensitive and not many can convey the message without messing it up. But you have done it very beautifully by maintaining it close to reality and also kept it very light and suttle without any over exaggeration so that when you finish reading you have a smile on your face.
“Thusyantha he thusyantha” was a complete entertainer. I really don’t know under what category to box it because it had all aspects. Negativity (which is not so negative), romance, comedy, power, masculinity/ femininity of male / female and much more.
I realised that most of us resemble Thuruvan to some extent (atleast me). Irrespective of our good intentions the way we present it only is noted by the society, but no one bothers to see it in depth and identify the good intentions behind those actions or realise that it was of some good to them as well.
And in today’s world even the good deeds have to be done in a harsh manner for it to achieve its actual purpose.
On the other the person doing it won’t be bothered of what people are thinking, and continues with the good deeds towards the society. They won’t bother to sit and explain themselves and seek validation.
They only expect a reality check from those close to their heart.
While people think they the hard and cold hearted, deep down they are the people who have really faced problems, heart breaks and have suffered a lot. But they don’t want others to know about it and also don’t want people do face the same problems.
But on the whole all the characters were presented and distributed beautifully.
Thanks for a good read.
Looking forward to more of
your writings.✨
